the way I feel could best be described by a monologue from the made for TV movie…

Or just a poem:

I forbid myself from thinking,
I forgave myself for dreaming,
To focus on my pain.
I waken what’s been weeping,
I wrestle what’s been wailing,
But I feel it just the same.
No better now,
No closer to how,
And too fragile to touch.
Just need to move,
Like I have something to prove,
But I honestly don’t know how much.
A fine piece of china,
A constant reminder,
Of exactly what I’ve become.
Scared of being broken,
And not noticing I AM broken,
Makes it harder to overcome.
But I forbid myself from feeling,
I cut off the revealing,
I hide down in my cell.
I need to break out,
But I can’t move without,
A drink from an empty well.
I get tied up in thinking I’m fat,
Wondering how I look in this or that,
And let that distract me for a moment.
But underneath the distraction,
Is a needed overreaction,
Or is it merely a cry for commitment?
Committing myself TO thinking,
Committing myself TO dreaming,
And focusing on my pain,
Wakening myself and moving,
Pushing myself and proving,
That only I can effectively gain,
That only I can effectively change,
That only I can rearrange,
That which I see,
That which is wrong with me.

And no, I am not THAT upset. Just poopy days. Ah, you know.

10 Responses to “the way I feel could best be described by a monologue from the made for TV movie…”


  1. Gravatar Icon 1 mingaling Apr 20th, 2006 at 3:50 pm

    It’s because you’re not going to Sweetwater today, right?

  2. Gravatar Icon 2 duane Apr 20th, 2006 at 4:28 pm

    You know me so well, Lori! Wednesday, though, right???!!

  3. Gravatar Icon 3 mingaling Apr 20th, 2006 at 4:55 pm

    I’m there.

  4. Gravatar Icon 4 wendy Apr 20th, 2006 at 6:59 pm

    Cheer up - I LOVE U!! :>)

  5. Gravatar Icon 5 scottk Apr 20th, 2006 at 9:06 pm

    Poopy days pass I know it may not seem like it but they do

  6. Gravatar Icon 6 Kim Apr 20th, 2006 at 9:56 pm

    I LOVE that poem.

  7. Gravatar Icon 7 deb Apr 21st, 2006 at 9:40 am

    If you ever need to talk, you know I am always there.

  8. Gravatar Icon 8 Mark Apr 21st, 2006 at 12:49 pm

    I love your poems. This one makes me feel sad though. It is so very beautiful to me because I really feel your words deep down. “But I can’t move without, a drink from an empty well” “I forbid myself from thinking” “Too fragile to touch” “I hide” Your words map out the way I feel some days, but not this beatuiful Friday… I hope your weekend rocks!

    ~ Mark

  9. Gravatar Icon 9 Columbus Apr 21st, 2006 at 1:04 pm

    Oh no. Oh, no.
    Not another poopy day again, darling.
    Duane, I’m watching you- put that spliff down!!!
    Did I ever say that you’re fat? No. You ARE handsome, cheerful, nice, lean and mean and sporty and…and…and with beautiful toothpaste model’s teeth… OK? cheer up! x

  10. Gravatar Icon 10 Joe Apr 21st, 2006 at 1:31 pm

    Chin up Meredith Baxter!

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